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 ## Data Parallelism
 
-Most users with just 2 GPUs already enjoy the increased training speed up thanks to DataParallel (DP) and DistributedDataParallel (DDP) that are almost trivial to use. This is a built-in feature of Pytorch.
+Most users with just 2 GPUs already enjoy the increased training speed up thanks to `DataParallel` (DP) and `DistributedDataParallel` (DDP) that are almost trivial to use. This is a built-in feature of Pytorch.
 
 ## ZeRO Data Parallelism
 
 ZeRO-powered data parallelism (ZeRO-DP) is described on the following diagram from this [blog post](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/blog/zero-deepspeed-new-system-optimizations-enable-training-models-with-over-100-billion-parameters/)
 ![DeepSpeed-Image-1](https://huggingface.co/datasets/huggingface/documentation-images/resolve/main/parallelism-zero.png)
 
-It can be difficult to wrap one's head around it, but in reality the concept is quite simple. This is just the usual DataParallel (DP), except, instead of replicating the full model params, gradients and optimizer states, each GPU stores only a slice of it.  And then at run-time when the full layer params are needed just for the given layer, all GPUs synchronize to give each other parts that they miss - this is it.
+It can be difficult to wrap one's head around it, but in reality the concept is quite simple. This is just the usual `DataParallel` (DP), except, instead of replicating the full model params, gradients and optimizer states, each GPU stores only a slice of it.  And then at run-time when the full layer params are needed just for the given layer, all GPUs synchronize to give each other parts that they miss - this is it.
 
 Consider this simple model with 3 layers, where each layer has 3 params:
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 ## Naive Model Parallelism (Vertical) and Pipeline Parallelism
 
-Naive Model Parallel (MP) is where one spreads groups of model layers across multiple GPUs. The mechanism is relatively simple - switch the desired layers `.to()` the desired devices and now whenever the data goes in and out those layers switch the data to the same device as the layer and leave the rest unmodified.
+Naive Model Parallelism (MP) is where one spreads groups of model layers across multiple GPUs. The mechanism is relatively simple - switch the desired layers `.to()` the desired devices and now whenever the data goes in and out those layers switch the data to the same device as the layer and leave the rest unmodified.
 
 We refer to it as Vertical MP, because if you remember how most models are drawn, we slice the layers vertically. For example, if the following diagram shows an 8-layer model:
 
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ Problems:
 - the main deficiency and why this one is called "naive" MP, is that all but one GPU is idle at any given moment. So if 4 GPUs are used, it's almost identical to quadrupling the amount of memory of a single GPU, and ignoring the rest of the hardware. Plus there is the overhead of copying the data between devices. So 4x 6GB cards will be able to accommodate the same size as 1x 24GB card using naive MP, except the latter will complete the training faster, since it doesn't have the data copying overhead. But, say, if you have 40GB cards and need to fit a 45GB model you can with 4x 40GB cards (but barely because of the gradient and optimizer states)
 - shared embeddings may need to get copied back and forth between GPUs.
 
-Pipeline Parallel (PP) is almost identical to a naive MP, but it solves the GPU idling problem, by chunking the incoming batch into micro-batches and artificially creating a pipeline, which allows different GPUs to concurrently participate in the computation process.
+Pipeline Parallelism (PP) is almost identical to a naive MP, but it solves the GPU idling problem, by chunking the incoming batch into micro-batches and artificially creating a pipeline, which allows different GPUs to concurrently participate in the computation process.
 
 The following illustration from the [GPipe paper](https://ai.googleblog.com/2019/03/introducing-gpipe-open-source-library.html) shows the naive MP on the top, and PP on the bottom:
 
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ Implementations:
 - [SageMaker](https://arxiv.org/abs/2111.05972) - this is a proprietary solution that can only be used on AWS.
 - [OSLO](https://github.com/tunib-ai/oslo) - this is implemented based on the Hugging Face Transformers.
 
-🤗 Transformers status: as of this writing none of the models supports full-PP. GPT2 and T5 models have naive PP support. The main obstacle is being unable to convert the models to `nn.Sequential` and have all the inputs to be Tensors. This is because currently the models include many features that make the conversion very complicated, and will need to be removed to accomplish that.
+🤗 Transformers status: as of this writing none of the models supports full-PP. GPT2 and T5 models have naive MP support. The main obstacle is being unable to convert the models to `nn.Sequential` and have all the inputs to be Tensors. This is because currently the models include many features that make the conversion very complicated, and will need to be removed to accomplish that.
 
 Other approaches:
 
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 ## ZeRO DP+PP+TP
 
-One of the main features of DeepSpeed is ZeRO, which is a super-scalable extension of DP. It has already been discussed in [ZeRO Data Parallel](#zero-data-parallel). Normally it's a standalone feature that doesn't require PP or TP. But it can be combined with PP and TP.
+One of the main features of DeepSpeed is ZeRO, which is a super-scalable extension of DP. It has already been discussed in [ZeRO Data Parallelism](#zero-data-parallelism). Normally it's a standalone feature that doesn't require PP or TP. But it can be combined with PP and TP.
 
 When ZeRO-DP is combined with PP (and optionally TP) it typically enables only ZeRO stage 1 (optimizer sharding).